FBI agent/ best firends sister
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FBI agent/ best firends sister
I have an idea where a FBI agent is sent to find out who thrented to kill a woman...he fals for the woman he is suppose to protect, thing is she is his best friends sister....any takers?
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Its really interesting actually, why is the woman in threat of being murdered? or would that pull into the story later maybe? I dont know if Ill do it at this second but it sounds hella fun
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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Hmmm I was thinking that the killer is obessed with her but tired of her rejecting her....was thinking of making him a multimuderer, and tells the brother who is a priest that he is going to kill her during confession....
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Wow now thats really nice, so the FBI agent is very close friends to this priest who happens to have the sister that the agent is to protect. Nice...
I think this is a great idea
I think this is a great idea
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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Im terrible with females so the agent sounds cool to me
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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Im still writing up my background if you could start that would be wonderful
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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Okay if you dont mind I will do the opening...figured they grew up together (the two guys) and she was at a bording school. Then finally came back...and such.
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I have a profile up and a link is in my sig
thats fine I also assumed as such and wrote up that he knew the brother and of the sister but didnt do a whole lot in the background
thats fine I also assumed as such and wrote up that he knew the brother and of the sister but didnt do a whole lot in the background
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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Sorry its taking so long had to make some dinner and it took me a while to remember the site that I get my Characters pics from...I am working on the profile and will have a post up soon.
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Its fine I was playing KOTOR while I waited
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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Knights of the old republic, a star wars rp game
cool Ill go take a looksy
cool Ill go take a looksy
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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I like the profile
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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game is posted see if you liek I can edit. I dont have my microsoft word so there will me mistakes hopefully they are not too bad.
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Its fine I found it and Ill post in a min
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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Cool I just worry about my posts sometimes lol had to get a lot into this first one...and hopefully it gave you enough to work with too,
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You gave me plenty I was worried I wouldn't able to keep up XD
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I think I finally caught up a bit, you type so much but I like that I prefer lots of detail! I see this one doing swell
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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I dont always write as detailed ones sometimes I try to get a point across and I fail lol I just hope to keep the story line going.
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Its fine, I can be the same way specially when I post late at night. There will be moments when I can barely pump out 2-3 paragraphs and then some times Ill do 5-6
Maz117- Number of posts : 95
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So what did you think of her little chat with her dog?? Of course that may not be who is tracking her....just figured I would add a level of depth to her.
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